How to write a hook for a clip

Why the first seconds decide the clip

Short-form feeds let viewers leave with one swipe. Platforms measure that decision directly. In YouTube Analytics, Stayed to watch is "the percentage of times viewers stayed to watch past the initial seconds of a Short", and Engaged views count only viewers who stayed past those initial seconds (YouTube Help). For long videos, YouTube's retention report shows how many viewers are still watching after the first 30 seconds (YouTube Help).

TikTok's own advice for ads points the same way. Its creative best practices say to "introduce your content proposition in the first 3 seconds" and to "prioritize your hook in the first 6 seconds" (TikTok Ads Help, updated June 2025). That page is written for ads, but the same feed and the same swipe apply to clips.

A hook has three layers. Use at least two of them.

How to build a cold open, step by step

1. Find the payoff line first. Locate the sentence or action that makes the clip worth watching.
2. Decide where to start. Either start on the payoff line itself, or start on the question the payoff answers. Do not start on greetings, names or "so".
3. Trim the breath. Cut the pause, the "um" and the first half-word. The first frame should already have speech or motion.
4. Consider a flash-forward. Show one or two seconds of the payoff, then cut back to the setup. Use it only when the setup is needed and the clip still reaches that exact moment.
5. Write the on-screen text last. Make it add information the audio does not already give, such as who is speaking or what is at stake.
6. Check the first frame. It is the first thing a scrolling viewer sees. Avoid black frames, blurred motion and closed eyes.
7. Watch it muted. Many people scroll with sound off. The text and visual alone should still make the viewer curious.

24 hook patterns with templates

Use these as templates for on-screen text or for choosing where the clip starts. Brackets mark the parts you fill in from the actual clip. Never put words in a real person's mouth; the text must match what the clip shows.

Pick the pattern that the moment already supports. A "secret" hook on a clip that reveals nothing will lose viewers and trust.

On-screen text: length, placement and timing

• Keep it short. A viewer must read it before they decide to swipe. Two short lines are usually the limit.
• Mind reading speed. The BBC's subtitle guidelines recommend 160–180 words per minute, or about 0.33–0.375 seconds per word (BBC Subtitle Guidelines). TikTok's ad guidance recommends "5-10 words per second" for text overlays. The BBC figure is the safer choice for anything the viewer must fully read.
• Place it clear of the app interface. TikTok tells advertisers not to put text "on areas where buttons, usernames, and captions may appear" (TikTok Ads Help). In practice, keep the hook in the upper part of the frame, away from the right-side buttons and the bottom caption area.
• Keep it on screen long enough. Leave the hook up for at least the first few seconds. Many editors keep it for the whole clip as a title.
• Do not cover the face or the action. The hook should frame the video, not hide it.
• Use high contrast. White text with a dark outline or box stays readable on any footage. See how to caption clips for size and contrast guidance.

Keep the hook honest

A hook that over-promises hurts you three ways. Viewers leave when the clip does not deliver, and that shows up in your retention numbers. Campaign reviewers can reject misleading posts. Platforms can act on it too: YouTube's spam policy lists "malicious clickbait", meaning titles, thumbnails or imagery that "trick users into clicking on a video that does not deliver what was promised". Its own example is a title that offers a full sports match when the video shows only a clip (YouTube spam policy).

Follow three rules. Quote only words that the person actually says in the source. Do not imply an event, a relationship or an endorsement that did not happen. Put any necessary context, such as "joking" or "hypothetical", in the text when the clip could mislead without it.

Test hooks like an experiment

Treat each hook as a guess you can refute. Post the same kind of moment with different hooks and compare the results. On YouTube Shorts, compare Stayed to watch. On other platforms, compare average watch time and the retention in the first seconds, where the platform shows them.

• Change one element at a time: the start point, the text, or the first frame.
• Compare clips of similar length and topic. A 15-second clip and a 60-second clip are not a fair test.
• Wait until each post has enough views to compare. A handful of views tells you nothing.
• Keep a simple log: clip, hook pattern, start point, text, and the result. Patterns that win for your niche will show up after a few rounds.

Questions

Sources

We checked every claim on this page against these sources on the date above. Platform rules and rates change often. Found an error? Tell us and we will fix it.

1. YouTube Help: Content reach and engagement (Stayed to watch, Engaged views)
2. YouTube Help: Measure key moments for audience retention
3. TikTok Ads Help: Creative best practices for performance ads
4. TikTok Ads Help: TopView ad specifications (safe zone guidance)
5. BBC Subtitle Guidelines
6. YouTube Help: Spam, deceptive practices, and scams policies

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• Can clip channels make money on YouTube Shorts?YouTube pays Shorts creators 45% of their Creator Pool share, but its reused content policy blocks clip channels that add little, even with permission.
• TikTok rules and monetization for clippersTikTok's Creator Rewards Program needs 10,000 followers, age 18+, one of 8 countries and original 1-minute videos. Clips of other creators rarely qualify.
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